Oh, wow, well I wouldn’t know what to say about it actually. XD Maybe you could put this instead:
“Due to your uncontrollable magic, you were sent to a distant school for young mages. Unfortunately, on the way there, one of your Chaos style spells went haywire, and now you’re in this godforsaken place. You realize, however, that this just might be a new opportunity for you: this isolated group of islands is the perfect training grounds!”
It’s the intro hint from the mod itself.